Colons instead of dashes
Colons can be used to replace dashes ( - ). These are common in informal
writing; however, they are not appropriate in academic texts. Notice in
the following sentence
The manager's incoming brief contained one major task
- to organise and allocate team roles more efficiently.
the dash could be replaced with a colon
The manager's incoming brief contained one major task
:
to organise and allocate team roles more efficiently.
This dash in this sentence
These factors have been identified as important contributory
factors to the large increase of repetitive strain injury during the 1980s
- new technology, changing work practices and inappropriate medical management.
could also be replaced with a colon
These factors have been identified as important contributory
factors to the large increase of repetitive strain injury during the 1980s
:
new technology, changing work practices and inappropriate medical management.
In both sentences above, the role of the colon is to signal that an explanation
is to follow.
BEWARE: NOT ALL DASHES CAN BE REPLACED WITH COLONS
Occasionally, you will find that informal sentences punctuated with dashes
will require the dashes to be replaced with commas rather than colons;
for example, the sentence
Angry truck-drivers from across the state - who were
all protesting against excessive petrol prices - organised blockades of
many petroleum supply depots.
in an academic context should be written as:
Angry truck-drivers from across the state, who were
all protesting against excessive petrol prices, organised blockades of
many petroleum supply depots.
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