Repairing sentence fragments by repunctuating the sentence
Some sentence fragments can be successfully repaired by making different
punctuation choices; for example,
There are two options which would alleviate the problem.
Raising the dam wall or increasing the size of the spillway.
The sentence fragment 'Raising the dam wall or increasing the size of
the spillway' can be repaired by attaching it to the previous sentence
with a colon ( : ) where it will act as a
dependent clause.
There are two options which would alleviate the problem:
raising the dam wall or increasing the size of the spillway.
Here are some other examples of sentence fragments. These sentence fragments
can also be repaired by repunctuating them. Listen to the difference between
the sentence fragment and the completed sentence.
| Sentence fragment |
Complete sentence
(after repair) |
Annotation |

Having established their role outside the home. Women were reluctant
to leave the workforce at the end of the war. |

Having established their role outside the home,
women were reluctant to leave the workforce at the end of the war |
Repunctuate by changing the full stop to a comma; this creates
one complete sentence. |

Moderate consumption of wine has been found to be beneficial.
While overindulgence of alcohol can have serious effects on health. |

Moderate consumption of wine has been found to be beneficial
while
overindulgence of alcohol can have serious effects on health. |
Repunctuate by eliminating the full stop to create one complete
sentence |

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