Examples of Topic Sentences
Here is an example of a paragraph with a clear topic sentence:
Topic sentence
The topic sentence outlines what the paragraph
will discuss. The body of the paragraph further explains and expands
upon the point made in the topic sentence. |
This design involves a redesign
of the spindle mechanism of the outdoor tap. This involves
replacing the turning action of the conventional tap with a new system
where a lever provides the mechanical movement. Pulling the lever
upwards engages a push-rod connected to the normal washer that forces
the washer down towards the seat, preventing water flow. When the
handle is released, a downward action on the lever opens the tap valve
as the push-rod raises the washer, allowing water flow. The design
incorporates a ratchet locking system, similar to that used in an
automobile hand-brake, which allows the lever to be locked in a number
of positions, provided by graduations in the ratchet. This allows
the user to turn the tap on or off and set the flow rate, as per a
conventional tap. |
Here is another example of a paragraph with a clear topic sentence, yet
in this example the topic sentence lies at the end of the paragraph.
Topic sentence
Despite its position at the end of the paragraph,
the topic sentence still provides an outline of the point/s the paragraph
is focussed upon. |
The passive voice is used in this paragraph to focus
explicitly on what happened to the bacterial colonies rather than
on who or what inhibited them. Nominalisation and large nominal groups
are also used as devices to consolidate information about the actions/processes
involved inside noun groups which can be then placed in the most focussed
position in the sentence, i.e. sentence subject or sentence initial
position. Together, the use of the passive
voice, nominalisation and large nominal groups (along with the jargon
of the discipline) play a major role in achieving the distinctive
style or language of Biology. |
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