Let's look at why Text B is more effective. Both macro and micro features make this version of the passage more effective.

The Macro features involved in making Text B effective include:

the presence of a clear thesis statement;

the use of clear sentence structure;

the logical flow of information in the text;

the focus the text has maintained on the subject.

The Micro features involved in making Text B effective include:

the repetition of key subject words and key descriptive words throughout the text;

clearly focussed sentences;

the use of connective words and transition signals.

Select either the Macro features button or the Micro features button