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Stage 2

Although the personal language has now been eliminated from the passage, the tone is still very informal. One of the factors responsible for this is the unsophisticated WORDS the writer has used to express their argument.

Increase the academic tone of this text by using the pull down menus to replace the informal language with more formal alternatives. There may be several correct alternatives.

. It is organised into numerous separate sections, which article into a series of small, easily readable sections. These browse through the and quickly find important pieces of information. These pieces of information are also easily because gives a brief yet highly detailed outline of .

such as references and statistical data . In contrast to these strengths, however, the article . the authors have used a number of references that are in comparison to the publication date of their article. , however, is the authors' obvious bias against hospitalisation as a treatment alternative.

 

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