Do not overclaim
Academic writing requires your claims to be specific and precise rather
than general. Therefore, claims need to be qualified; that is, information
on the conditions and situations to which the claim applies need to be
explicitly stated.
Unqualified 'blanket statement':
Age can never be irrelevant.
Opinion is qualified:
| It
appears likely that age is rarely
an irrelevant factor in
clinical pharmaceutical trials because this factor can impact on
the dosage required. |
The modality
of the claim has also been lowered.
Qualification limits the claim to a certain
situation and provides a reason for the claim. |
The following statement involves a claim of 'greater than ...' yet the
reader is not told what this claim is in comparison to. The claim must
be qualified by defining 'greater than what'.
Unqualified statement:
Species that occur in xeric habitats generally produce leaves that
have a greater thickness, specific mass, internal-to-external
leaf area ratio, and stomatal density.
Opinion is qualified:
| Species that occur in xeric
habitats generally produce leaves that have a greater thickness,
specific mass, internal-to-external leaf area ratio, and stomatal
density compared to species in moist or
shaded habitats. |
The claim is qualified
by defining the object that is being used as the standard of comparison. |
In the following example, a qualification to the claim exists but it
is much less explicit than in the previous examples:
| Many plant species have structures
on their seeds that enhance their dispersal, an event that is
considered to be necessary for a plant species reproduction
and subsequent survival. |
These words imply a
qualification to the claim that proceeds it: 'given our current understanding,
the research suggests this is necessary'. |
Further information upon techniques used to include qualifying information
in your sentences is provided in extending nominal groups.
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